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NaNoEdMo and You

Note: This post also appears on the Indie Book Collective’s blog page today.

I love March. It’s one of my favorite months of the year because we eagerly wave good-bye to winter and embrace the warmth and green and brightness that is spring. In fact, March is one of my favorite months to write because I can take long walks without freezing my toes off and think about where my stories are going or develop new characters. Everything seems to inspire me—a robin sitting on its nest, a newly budded flower, the blue sky—I find story inspirations everywhere, and my muse is as giddy as a school child at recess when she thinks of all the story possibilities.

Spring aside, there’s another major March event that my friends will never let me forget: March Madness. For those of you who aren’t familiar with it, March Madness is all about college basketball tournaments. In years gone by, I’ve filled out brackets and joined the company bracket pool with the others, but this year, I’m doing March Madness in my own way. Before I tell you about it, however, I need to ask you a question. Remember that tiny little event we talked about back in November called National Novel Writing Month? You know—the one where we took the challenge and wrote 50,000 words in 30 days? (Hey now, don’t groan at me. I can hear you from all the way over here.)

At the end of November, I told you that I’d be back in the spring with more NaNo news and posts, and I’m excited to tell you that the time has come. It’s time to dust off those manuscripts, flex those writing muscles, and take the next step toward achieving your publishing dreams. I told you that the IBC is here to help you reach your writing goals, and that I’d be going through the process with you.

This year, as my own version of March Madness, I’m participating in a month-long program for writers called National Novel Editing Month. It’s designed for those pesky little internal editors whose red pens you stole and who you sent on vacation during NaNoWriMo. This month, NaNoEdMo participants gather together and, in traditional NaNoWriMo style, join forces to help push each other to edit their novels. The challenge is to log 50 hours of editing time by the end of the month. And since I know you’re all working hard on your own stories, who wants to join me?

Before you panic and run away at the thought of this challenge, let me assure you that the hardest part is behind us. Writing at least 50,000 words in 30 days is a monstrous task, and if you can do that, then logging 50 editing hours in 31 days will be a piece of cake (and you even have an extra day!). Even if you didn’t make it to 50,000 words in November, you can still participate in NaNoEdMo. The philosophy is the same: at the end of the month, it’s really all about advancing toward your publishing dreams. If you can only log 3 editing hours the whole month, you’re that much closer to having a polished manuscript that’s ready for publication. And the best part is that you don’t have to do it alone. Grab your favorite writing buddy, go to your local writers’ group, or talk to your muse. Tell your friends that you need them to check on your editing status to see how many hours you’ve logged this week. You can do it!

I’m also excited to tell you that NaNoEdMo is just step two of our journey. In June of this year, the IBC is introducing its own month-long program called National Novel Marketing Month—NaNoMarMo for short. NaNoMarMo is going to be amazing, and I can’t wait for you all to participate. The goal will be to set up and implement your author platform and start marketing your book by the end of June, whether you’ve published it yet or not. We’ll have message boards, a website, prizes, and so much more. The IBC will release more details about this program soon, so keep watching for more info.

Melissa Dalton is a writer and a book lover, and she has been all her life. Her first novel, Merrick Maples and the Legend of the Lost Stone, which she wrote during NaNoWriMo 2010, will be released in June 2012. Find her on Twitter, Facebook, or at her blog.

Magic Mondays: Spring Fever

Okay, I admit it. February—especially the end of February—is my least favorite time of year. Sure, it’s a great month that has a ton of great qualities: it’s shorter than the other months (which could be good or bad, depending on what’s going on), it has Valentine’s Day, and we gain a few more minutes of sunlight. But it’s the hardest time of year for me because I am so distracted! Although we’ve been fortunate and have had a mild winter here, this is normally the time of year when I sigh and stare at my wall calendar that taunts me with sunny pictures of the ocean or someplace tropical. And this year is no different—despite the tame weather, I am so ready for spring. Spring fever makes it hard to write. Just as I sit down to spend some quality revisions time with my characters, the tell me they’re ready to take a break, and then they go outside to play without me. (Even now, I just spent the last five minutes staring out at the sunshine instead of writing this post.)

This time of year gives a lot of people spring fever too. How about you? What do you do to shake the winter blues and keep yourself motivated? Feel free to share your thoughts in the comment section.

While working on Merrick Maples and the Legend of the Lost Stone, I did a lot of research about pirates and the types of things they were interested in. I asked myself such questions as, what motivated them? Were they all really rum-drinking, buried-treasure-hunting sea dogs as movies and books romanticize them to be? Could I have Jack Sparrow come and captain my crew? Would it be hard for my thirteen-year-old characters to join them? But the more research I did, I kept coming back to the question of treasure and what kind of “treasure” or reward would motivate my characters enough to act. For some, the answers were obvious: immortal power and slave subjects, the opportunity to plunder for spoils in a new world, and so on. But other answers surprised me. I mean, really, who knew that magical fizzy soda in my characters’ fantasy world could be such a good motivator?

All this talk about buried treasure is even a motivator for myself as a writer. Let’s be honest: as writers, we all share a dream that we will suddenly become inspired with a story idea, sit down at a computer, and then proceed to write the world’s best novel in a single draft. Obviously that’s not going to happen unless you’re superhuman, and those of us without super powers, can easily become frustated during the writing and revising process. We’ll start writing a draft, love it, leave it alone for a while, and then come back to read it again and discover that it’s the worst thing that we could possibly have written in our entire lives. And, due to our lack in superpowers, we start spiraling down into thinking that being a writer was a bad idea and that we should never write anything again, ever.

Don’t worry, this is exactly where my pirate research and talk about buried treasure comes in handy. Your motivator here should be the thought that your story idea is amazing. Don’t give up on it! Think about that line that spurred your idea in the first place. That’s the core of your story—a gold piece, if you will—and the buried treasure is your finished novel. I call it the “buried treasure” because the elements of your soon-to-be-finished novel are in there; you just have to dig them out. Now, think about those pirates again. When you see the glee on their faces after digging up their treasure chest, don’t you think they probably thought the journey was all worth it?

So, what gets you inspired? How do you decide on a story idea? What’s the best “buried treasure” story you ever found in your own writing? I would love to hear your comments.

I don’t know about where you are, but in my neck of the woods, it’s cold. Just this weekend we got a fresh blanket of snow (on top of the two inches we already had), and the temperatures and windchill factors have dropped down to the teens or lower—especially at night. Although I’m used to this weather and have even considered investing in a dogsled team for emergencies, I can’t help but long for the golden days of summer when overcast days only happened when thunderstorms popped up and temperatures were a bit more tropical. This time of year always makes me long for my favorite vacation destination: the Caribbean.

If I close my eyes, I can almost smell the salty air around the ocean and see those crystal-blue waters. And if I listen closely enough, I can almost hear the creaking of an old pirate ship as it makes its way to some island where there will be treasure and a hearty drink to fill the sailors’ bellies. I must admit, I’m a bit envious. To feel the wind and water on your face as you sail on whatever adventures your captain has for you sounds exciting—particularly as a woman. Most pirates during the Golden Age of Piracy were men, but some famous ladies like Anne Bonny were able to make their lives as pirates for quite a while. These women were to be feared just as much as their male counterparts. In fact, some women even disguised themselves as men so that they could join other sailing crews and gain more respect from the other sailors. Few women pirates were able to become captains and command their own ships, but those who did quickly made names for themselves and earned their places in pirate history. It makes me wonder what kinds of reactions they received when they captured other ships or plundered spoils. Were their prisoners surprised? Impressed? Afraid? I think it was probably a mixture of all these emotions.

One of my favorite sections while writing Merrick Maples and the Legend of the Lost Stone was where Merrick and Lorena meet the pirate crew for the first time. Writing about their life on the sea made me wonder what it would be like to have my own pirate crew and ship, so I decided to start one. According to the pirate name generator site I found, my captain name would be Cap’n Lindsey Rotmeat. It strikes fear into your hearts, doesn’t it? Now that I have a pirate name, I need a crew to join me on the high seas. The only rule is that you have to have a pirate name first. Who’s interested?

Happy New  Year!

I know I’m a week late, but this is my first post in 2012, so it still counts, right? The new year always brings new possibilities and resolutions, and over the last month or so, I’ve been thinking a lot about what I want to accomplish this year. How about you? What are your resolutions? For me, I made some of the normal ones you hear every year: getting into shape, cooking at home more often, and so on, but I wanted more out of my resolutions than that. As I thought about what I’d accomplished in 2011 and what I still wanted to do, I realized there was quite a bit that I was proud of. For starters, I discovered the Indie Book Collective through Twitter (and have learned so much from them about the business side of the publishing industry). I also created this blog, participated in (and won!) my second NaNoWriMo event, did a complete reread of my novel-in-progress, and so much more that it would take several blog posts to do each item justice.

This year is going to be even better. I’m excited to announce that Merrick Maples and the Legend of the Lost Stone will be published in June of this year, and I can’t wait to share it with you all! I’ll be sharing regular updates with you about how the revision process is going, updates from the characters themselves, and more. I’m also planning to have several guest bloggers share their thoughts on the writing process, discuss writing for the YA genre, and talk about anything else they want to share. I’ll be sharing book reviews and some giveaways too.

So far January is off to a great start, and I’m excited to see what the rest of 2012 brings. I hope the new year brings exciting adventures for you too!

The holidays are a magical time. Families get together, we eat tons of food, and there is an excitement in the air that you don’t really get at any other point in the year. If you’re like me, December is also the time of year when you recover from the previous month’s NaNoWriMo event and take some time to reflect on the year’s writing goals. I won’t lie; I always promise I’m going to take December off from writing and pick things up at the beginning of the new year, but this year, I’m having trouble letting go. Everywhere I turn, I seem to be inspired by some sort of holiday decoration, commercial, or end-of-the-year thing. And, darn it, my muse is almost talking to me faster than my fingers can type.

So far this year, my inspirations have come from A Muppet Christmas Carol, snow, Santa, peppermint mochas, and Bing Crosby’s Christmas album. With all those things combined, I’m in a holiday writing dreamland. But all this wintry writing made me wonder—what inspires your stories during the holidays? Do you take some time to hibernate your characters and revisit them in the new year? Does the thought of warm Christmas cookies and a big glass of milk (or a peppermint mocha or tea or some other beverage) make you want to get cozy by the fire and write to your heart’s content?

What holiday traditions do your characters have? Do they celebrate Christmas? Hanukkah? Kwanza? Winter Solstice? Do they hibernate for the winter and only reappear after it’s spring?

No matter what holiday you celebrate, I hope you and your characters have a very happy December. For now, you’ll have to excuse me; I feel a snow-inspired scene coming on.

Update: I’m hearing reports that the rafflecopter isn’t working. To enter the contest, please leave a comment below with your name and e-mail address. Thanks, everyone!

Synopsis from K.C. Neal’s website: Corinne lives an average teenage life working at her dad’s cafe, hanging out with her best friend, and trying to forget a falling-out with her almost-boyfriend Mason. Things take a strange turn when she uses her late grandmother’s food dyes for a bake sale, and her customers suddenly find her irresistibly alluring. Then she discovers she and Mason are haunted by the same dreams of a dark force that consumes everything in its path. Pursued by shadowy figures and a crazy woman with secrets from the past, Corinne must find out who her grandmother really was. In her quest to unravel her family’s history, she learns she is destined to protect this world–and the dark world of her dreams. She races to find the answers she seeks before her nightmares break free.

I must admit that when I started reading Pyxis, I had no idea where it was going to go, but that’s a good thing. We first meet Corinne as she’s selling baked goods in her high school, and every boy who comes through her line practically drools over her. Determined to get to the bottom of the mystery, Corinne and her best friend, Ang, start digging through the box of what they believe is Corinne’s late grandmother’s food dyes and then suddenly find themselves the centers of a secret society-like group. Although they try to obtain more information on this pyxis and what it all means, the previous generation of the group isn’t helping. All Corinne knows is that she must somehow find a way to get her aunt Doris, who has been placed in a retirement home because she had a stroke, to tell her what she needs to know. And with a crazy town local hot on their heels, Corinne knows that they don’t have much time.

Pyxis has a unique premise and will keep you on the edge of your seat until the end of the story,  and then leave you begging for more. Corinne is a strong, loveable protagonist who gets sucked into something she never even knew existed and refuses to let it go until she can get the information she needs. And the chemistry that grows between Corinne and Mason is undeniable. In many places, I found myself holding my breath, waiting for them to just get together already. It’s obvious that Mason is attracted to Corinne from the start, and he will do whatever he can to protect her—which may work out well in her favor as this story progresses. I give this 5/5 stars.

As an added bonus, I’m holding a week-long giveaway for this book, and one lucky reader (U.S. only) will win a copy—either in paperback or eBook, your choice. All you have to do is fill out the rafflecopter below, and you will be entered in to the contest. I will announce the winner next week after the contest closes.

About the author: Young adult fantasy author K.C. Neal is repped by herself and published by StoneHouse Ink. Her debut novel, Pyxis: The Discovery, has received enthusiastic praise from readers:
“Pyxis is a phenomenal debut that blew me away.” -K-Books (5/5 stars)
“An amazing cast of characters that I cannot wait to meet up with again in book two, Alight!” -YA-aholic.com (5/5 stars)
“A completely fresh and original concept in the world of YA Paranormal.” -BelleBooks review (5/5 stars)

Most of K.C. Neal’s days are filled with some combination of writing, reading, gardening, working, and watching stuff on Netflix with her husband and their maltipoo, Oscar. She has an irrational fixation with L.A., and during occasional trips there she pretends her life is more glamorous than it really is (“Entourage” is her guilty pleasure). She likes to surf and hang out on sandy beaches, where drinks are served adorned with tiny umbrellas.

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All month, I have been trying to decide exactly what to say to you to wrap up the writing adventure we’ve had during NaNoWriMo. But the truth is, I’m speechless. I always am at the end of November when I look back and realize the enormity of the literary ride we’ve just been on. Other NaNoWriMo veterans will tell you that you need to be prepared for anything during the month of November—and they are completely right. World catastrophes happen, children accidentally delete the last 5,000 words of your manuscript, or—as in my case—your computer breaks the week before Thanksgiving and you have to find another way to finish your novel. On November 1, we embarked on a journey together, determined to write 50,000 words in just 30 days. And no matter what happened to us throughout the month, we were determined to finish.

And now, here we are on December 1. Some of us slid through the month like a hot knife in butter, so focused on our novels that we didn’t even realize we’d finished with a week and a half to spare. And then there are others of us who dragged our novels across the finish line at 11:59 p.m. last night, looking beat up, half dead, and very badly needing a shower and solid food. How you got here doesn’t matter. The point is, you did it. I don’t want to know whether you hit your 50,000 word goal or not. That part doesn’t matter anymore. What does matter is whether or not you made progress this month. Are you 10,000 words closer to the end of your story than you were at the beginning of November? How about 3,000 words? Even if you only wrote 500 words in the entire month, you win!

NaNoWriMo isn’t about a required number of words or completing your first draft, although if you manage to hit those goals, then kudos to you. NaNoWriMo is about helping you take another step closer to your dream—you know, that dream you have of one day becoming a published author. It’s not about comparing yourself to your writing buddies to see who did better (although having a healthy competition among friends isn’t a bad thing during November). It’s about you and your book. If you made an effort at any point during November, then you should consider yourself a success as a NaNoWriMoer. I do.

Whether you hit 50,000 words or not, now that it’s December, you might find yourself asking, “So, uh, now what?” Now is when the next level of fun begins. You’ve written a novel. What do you do next? The first thing you need to do is go take a shower. A month’s worth of stink isn’t going to make you any new friends as you rejoin the real world and let your families back into your lives. Then, throw yourself a Thank Goodness It’s Over party. Celebrate your accomplishment! Thirty days of literary abandon is no easy feat, and you deserve a reward for your efforts. Once you’ve taken care of all that, blow your novel a kiss, turn off your computer, and go enjoy yourself for the upcoming holiday season. As hard as it is to imagine after the intimacy you’ve just shared with it, you and your novel really do need a break from each other to gain some new perspective. Give yourself at least two full weeks of separation time where you’re not working on it, thinking about it, or making notes on what you want to change in the future. Oh, and don’t forget to tell your inner editor that she can come back from vacation. She’ll have a nice present waiting for her when you open your novel again.

The next steps on the road to becoming a published author will be exciting, and that’s where the Indie Book Collective and I come in. Now that you’ve written a novel, your goal for 2012 should be to polish that story and get it ready for publication—whether you decide to join the indie author troops or query the help of an agent. But how do you get from here to there? There’s a lot to think about. You’ll need to edit your novel, create your author platform and start branding yourself in your book’s genre, format your manuscript so that it will be ready for eBook publication, and learn how to market your work to your target audience. But don’t worry. Although this sounds like a daunting task, take a look back at the month we’ve just finished and think about what you’ve accomplished. You just wrote an entire book in 30 days! If you can do that, the next part will be a piece of cake.

The Indie Book Collective offers free and low-cost workshops that teach you how to do all of these tasks, from social media and branding yourself to eFormatting and using your Amazon author page to its full advantage. You are not alone in this writerly journey, and the IBC wants to help. And, March is NaNoEdMo—National Novel Editing Month. Won’t you join me in March as we work to sculpt our NaNoWriMo masterpieces into polished prose we can share with the world? I think you should, and I’ll be back in March with some more tips on how to make NaNoEdMo work for you. Let’s make 2012 a year we’ll never forget—the year we get published!

Melissa Dalton is a YA writer who’s been in love with books her whole life. Her middle-grade novel, Merrick Maples and the Legend of the Lost Stone, which she wrote during NaNoWriMo 2010, will be released in June 2012. She is a two-time NaNoWriMo winner, and is currently enjoying her post-NaNoWriMo celebration. Find her on Twitter, on Facebook, or on her blog.

I have participated in NaNoWriMo twice, once in 2009 and once 2010. I won NaNoWriMo in 2009 and quit in 2010 to finish The Writer (my first published novel) in 2011.

This year, I am back in the game.

In 2009, I began writing my novel The Writer for NaNoWriMo and, not only did I win, I finished a manuscript that was awful. The goal of NaNoWriMo is not to produce a masterpiece but to teach you to write every day—to help you with discipline, to learn, to develop, to play, and to have fun. For me, participating is just training. As a writer, you can’t expect every piece you produce to be good or even acceptable—you also need to write bad text and practice and have fun. NaNoWriMo is a great place to accomplish those tasks.

After my first NaNoWriMo, I rewrote the whole novel and destroyed that original manuscript. It was the third version of the manuscript that eventually became the novel I published in 2011. My goal for NaNoWriMo 2010 was to write another story while finishing edits on The Writer. But I was unable to do it; it was too confusing and too messy, so I simply quit and focused all my energy on my novel.

This year, all my writings had been planned to take a pause between November 1st and November 30th so that I not only participate but win this edition.

One of the best things about 2011 came after I published my novel. I discovered a group of great writers called the Indie Book Collective. These people have taught me so much. I have learned a lot and have had the honor to interact with so many cool people. This year I hope we get together in a NaNoWriMo celebration and are also able to support each other during that time. Maybe what I missed out on the most during my precious years doing it.

The IBC people have taught me the values of writing and the values of other writers in social media, blog tours, and more. I have found friends, companions, laughs on their pages, comments, and exchanges, but above all, I have found my image as the writer that I didn’t know existed.

Be ready to laugh.

My image of a writer as a child was a person who sat in front of a typewriter or  a computer and drank coffee, smoked cigarettes and produced brilliant work; myself, 1988. Guess what. I quit smoking some years ago. It has been scientifically proved that smoking doesn’t increase your cool or your ability to produce brilliant work. After you type the story, it doesn’t matter if it was on a typewriter or the computer; you need to edit and edit and edit some more. And still after that, you edit once more. Brilliant work only happens after you have practiced a lot, which includes writing a lot of bad and boring stuff.

NaNoWriMo is a great time to do that. As a thriller/mystery writer, during NaNoWriMo, I can try a romantic theme or a futuristic theme. This is an exercise; this is for fun; be free to dream and play.

If you want to know what writing like crazy will be like, sitting down and putting the words down; forget for a moment what the future will bring and consider joining NaNoWriMo. I can’t guarantee that you will finish, but I can guarantee it’s going to be a blast!

My name is Steven, and in 2010, I completed my first NaNoWriMo novel. I did this with a full time job, a wife and a toddler. Now, I have the official “winner” badge, and 50k towards a young adult fantasy novel. I have to say, I loved the experience.

Looking back on it, the big thing that got in my way was my incomplete planning.

I am not a “pantser.” I figure that a first draft has enough that needs amended, removed and expanded even when you do have a plan. In fact, I see my plan as just that, a place to have the crazy meta-draft that is so thinly written that I can sketch out dozens of chapters and drop them all for a single, better idea. I like to think big and change fast. I also wanted to be sure I’d settle on an idea I’d like enough to spend months writing and rewriting and editing. I was successful, too, in that I liked the story just as much after I wrote it as I did before I started. Oh, the draft I wrote during NaNoWriMo is a lot of crap, but the core story in it is a good one.

When I was preparing for NaNoWriMo, I spent months deciding on the story idea and expanding it from a single idea in to something resembling a plot with main characters who I enjoyed. (In my case, my initial idea was, “What if magic was a consumable resource?”) Truthfully, though, something resembling a plot with likable main characters should be easy. Even a pantser should get that by the first few chapters. (If not, there may be precious few usable results when the month is over.)

Although I did succeed at NaNoWriMo, I didn’t manage to complete my notes before the month started. I thought I had enough. It turned out, I didn’t really. Toward the end I was trying to flesh out the story in the middle, as I had a rough sketch of the story, but I could already tell it had holes. This is important, though; regardless of whether you’re a pantser or a planner, you may find your story is complete before the month is up. It is important that you’re flexible enough to write additional or alternate scenes.

This gets much easier if you use software that supports drag-and-drop scene rearrangement. (Scrivener and yWriter support this.) While you won’t be editing during the month, after the month is over, it is nice to be able to quickly and easily drag the scenes to the correct location. Such software also makes it easy to write the story out-of-order, as it takes less than a second to jump to Chapter 3, and after the “Kill Them All” scene, add a new scene, “One Survivor.” In fact, as I was trying to fill out my 50,000 words, I wrote whole subplots as chapters after the end of my novel with the plan to drag the individual scenes into the correct locations later.

Along with poor planning for the novel, I also suffered from some poor planning when it came to the time I would have available. There were times when I thought I’d be able to write later than I could. There were times when family commitments came in to play and I did no writing that day. I managed by always trying to write more words than required and squeezing writing time in to places it would not have easily been possible. I actually wrote a full day’s worth of words on my phone while on a flight. (This was made easier by my writing it as an e-mail to myself on my phone—something that works while in “Airplane” mode—and then on my laptop, I could just do a copy and paste from the e-mail to my writing software.) Leverage the tools you have and what would otherwise be idle time, and it can happen.

Even with poor planning, it is possible to do NaNoWriMo with a full-time job and a family. I did it. You can do it too.

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